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A Cautionary Rinse

September 21, 2013
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in the shower,
where all things hopefully wash clean…
i had an idea.

world peace was attained.
the planet? healthy.
and all humans were equal in their humility.

clogged with the grey highlighted hair of my youth,
the drain.
where most decent ideas end clean.

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  1. alexkellyoc's avatar
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    September 21, 2013 06:20

    Reblogged this on alexkellyoc.

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    • The Vigilant Lens's avatar
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      September 21, 2013 06:25

      Thanks alexkellyoc, the reblog is much appreciated!

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  2. Jeff Nguyen's avatar
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    September 21, 2013 06:23

    We should all take such clarifying showers more often. Um, not together of course.

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    • The Vigilant Lens's avatar
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      September 21, 2013 06:28

      Just had a vision of myself showering with Dick Cheney. It wasn’t very sensual…but I did get some truthiness out of him? Now I must go take a solo shower to rinse that vision off…
      Thanks Jeff.

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        September 21, 2013 07:17

        Yikes, showering with Cheney…now I feel dirty, too. Thanks a lot, man. 😉

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  3. LionAroundWriting's avatar
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    September 21, 2013 06:27

    Awesomely put. A nice thought, often great thouhgts hit me while showering but I don’t have a waterproof notepad.

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    • The Vigilant Lens's avatar
      lens1 permalink*
      September 21, 2013 06:29

      Thanks. And exactly! I lose more decent photo ideas/digital spoken word stuff that way…

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